Story from Twine
Describe a meaningful learning experience that started with a story that you heard. What made it impactful for you? What senses did it appeal to? Did you recognize any of the storytelling techniques reviewed this week?
I read a story once upon a time about an author born and raised in the United States who followed his parents back to Syria. The story was brief and used a conversational tone as per the techniques we were taught. As I read it, I felt like I was involved in the story, which is why I still remember it so vividly, five years later!As with my story in Twine, I think giving readers a variety of different options and keeping them engaged is the most effective way to learn.
The learning purpose of my video is to teach people how to jack up your car if you a problem with your tires. The reason that the video a good medium for this learning purpose is the video could give us a clear view how how to exactly work on the car instead of only be using words. i have used cognitive load theory from what we have learned. It inspirses people for seeking more and more knowledge with their involvement. The most challenge part of my video is the noise in the outside, i wish i could have a microphone next time to capture my vioce next time.
Comment:
When I saw your twin, I was absolutely amazed. You did a fantastic job! The entire conceptualization and execution of the diagram were superb, and having illustrations for each little story was unexpectedly delightful. In your video, I was once again surprised. You talked about your learning experience on how to repair cars. This was a video format I had never thought of before — it’s so innovative and practical. Amazing!
Hi! I really like your video idea. I’ve jacked my car and replaced my tires before, but the first time can be scary, and having a demonstration like this is incredibly useful. I appreciate how you zoomed in on details and chose to show your face in the video instead of just your hands. It shows that you want to connect with your audience. Nice job!
Hello, Keifer. Thanks for sharing the method to jack up the car. That could be very useful for me. Also, both the story and the video are very interesting. I can easily understand your meaning. Your videos gave me a very relaxing learning environment. And, after seeing it, I wanted to try it myself. Thank you for bringing everyone a good learning experience!
Hi, Keifer I think your story is very interesting for me I would have an urge to read down the page, and your video means a lot to me, I now know how to change a tire, overall a very good video. I hope to see more instructional videos from you.
Hi Keifer,
I just wanted to leave a comment and say how impressed I am with your Twine story! I think you did a really great job including images in your story and it seems like you definitely have a good handle on using Twine! Myself, I could barely figure out how to link the different parts of the story together…
Great work!
Sam